What 5 things would I want if I was stranded on a desert island?
I would bring food, paper and pen, knives, clean clothes, and my computer. I have to bring food because it is one of the basic needs that we use everyday. I would bring paper and a pen. If I write something on the paper and put the paper in the glass bottles that I use for drinking water, throw it out and somebody picks it up and reads it, they might even let me get a ride on their ship. I would bring clean clothes so that I could dive underwater to fetch some fish and quickly come up and change my clothing. There might be sharks or box jellyfish in the ocean, so I want to bring a knife to stab the dangerous creatures in the ocean. I did not bring a bed because there is sand on the island, so I would just pile the sand to make a pillow and wear clothing when I am sleeping. I also want to bring my computer because I think it will be boring stranded on a deserted island with no one near me. It will be fun because on my computer, I could play games, search for books, and write in it.

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ReplyDeleteI think you should change knives into water, because you already have food, so you don't need to fetch fish to eat. When you are on an island, you don't have water. You have water, of course, but they are all salty. So, I think you should change knives into water in order to survive.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing, anyway!
ReplyDeleteokay, I will change it, By the way thanks!!!!
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