Museum Visit
I visited the Washington monument on Christmas Eve. When we got there, the tour guide said that the Washington monument represents the awe, respect, and gratitude the nation felt for its most essential Founding Father. I stepped ahead and looked closely at the Washington Monument. It had little marks on the white marble and stone. While I was studying the sculpture, the tour guide said, "When the monument was completed, it was the tallest building in the world at 555 feet, 5-1/8 inches," which amazed us. I was thinking, why do people who made the Washington Monument want it to become tall? I thought about it for a while and then, the tourist guide added, "You might be wondering why they want it to be so tall, " I turned my head toward the Tourist guide, and she said, "The people who built it want it to contain all the gratitude the nation felt for its most essential Founding Father."

Wow, that explains a lot! It is so good that you have a tourists guide!
ReplyDeleteLook at my story, too(and find mistakes).
ReplyDelete"I thought for a while and then, the tourist added…… " It should be "the tourist GUIDE" and the comma after "and then" should move to after "while". So the sentence should be: "I thought for a while, and then the tourist guide added……"
ReplyDeleteawesome! be our tourists guide next time:)
ReplyDeleteokay, I will and I also updated it, thanks!!
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