Hide and seek
Today, I played a game of hiding and seek with my friend. At first, she hid behind the door, so I found her easily. I knew she was behind the door, but I still said, "Where are you?" After this round, I told her that it was too short, so I said we could play another round and let her hide. This time, I counted to 60. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5... After I counted the numbers, I started to go and find her. I first walked into every room and checked very quickly, but I can not find my friend. Then, I checked every room carefully. I found her, which is why I always check carefully in hiding and seek to make sure that there are no hiding spots I have not checked in each room. She was under the bed and moved to the table; I found her crawling on her knees.
I found her quickly every time, but I am not a pro (professional or outstanding player). I could find her so quickly because she is bad at playing hide and seek, which is kind of like a noob (I just started playing). On the next round, I hid underneath the bed. It was hard to focus on the walking seeker, so the hiding spot switched to be in the closet. I did not crawl to the closet like my friend. I sneaked and walked slowly towards the closet, bending my knees. YAY! I did not get caught there. I buried myself under the clothing so I could camouflage into the dark clothes. I closed the light, so my friend thought I would not be in this room. I hid in there for several minutes and even brought a drink inside! I waited until my friend came, but she was just looking in the room and not in the closet. I was SO mad that she did not find me at all. When she was in front of me, she said, " Never mind, there is nobody in here, " After she said that, I wanted to come out and give up, but my friend made up a rule about not giving hints or giving up. After several hours playing that ONE round of hiding and seek, I did not want to play anymore because I am too hard to find for her, so we went to play something else. 😂

My friend thinks I am not in this room --> should you use past tense?
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ReplyDeleteYou said: "I told her that this round is too sort, so I said that we could play another round of you hiding, so I counted to 60 this time." It should be: "I told her that this round is too SHORT", not sort.
ReplyDeleteIt is right, PLEASE hit command+r this time, because I see it is right
ReplyDeleteI think you corrected it while Yumi reminds you, to be fair, it should count for a mistake because Yumi caught it anyway. ;) how do you think?
Deleteok, fair enough.
DeleteWho was the friend?
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